Sunday, March 11, 2012

Trick rabbit


Can you find the hidden sentence?

Gold you are like gold to me I
said before you compared me to a timid rabbit and now you bury
your face in your midnight pillow as though you
just blew a house down. All I want is for
you to say something nice I said, one goddam nice thing the
anger rising like steam and I could see your thrill
at my hurt and then you said, okay you remind me of
a ruby-throated hummingbird digging
nectar from lilacs. I smiled, me the sword and you
a magician dreaming the most delightful way to swallow me up



2 comments:

cs said...

I cannot find the hidden sentence but that elusiveness increases its appeal.

Fran said...

A for effort... try reading the words down the left side.